Heh true true my friend! I'll change that right away!gixo wrote:Haha you are very funny =D Actually i have never smoked a singel fag (damn i love that word now). Anyway, i've read both chapters now and they were simple awesome. I actually got a cold rush in the spine while reading Elisas quote .
Just one thing. "goes by the name of Eva" > "goes by the codename of EVA". ...not to be rude or anything . Actually we never got to know here real name.
Your post earlier in this thread actually prompted me to write about Elisa's words to Snake in PO. So you're the inspiration for that bit mate!
Thanks for the kind words mate, I really appreciate it, it's nice to have your efforts enjoyed by someone. I don't think many people will read it but I'll be happy knowing it's there for anyone that cares!
Thanks also for taking the time to read through them, it must have taken ages! lol.
P.S. I too have never experienced the bliss of a fag either! And honestly, I never want to either!